The shirt pocket and the smile are keepers. Not sure about white tie on white shirt, the contrast helps create visual interest.

Thought about double breasted at all? If you're going for a rakish look, a fashion forward choice like that would be helpful. As it is, your looks don't sit well with the safe choices being made here. If you're going to shave and cut the hair, it'll come together as-is.

Are you the groom or a guest? Guest I would do dark. Groom the white.