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Colonize the Open Web (fungiverse.wordpress.com)
submitted 2 years ago by to c/solarpunk@slrpnk.net
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New story, I hope you like it. Feedback always welcome.

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[–] 1 point 2 years ago (1 child)

I can see what you are trying to do in this text, but as a metaphor it doesn't really work and the use of "open web" etc makes it too up front as well. Which leaves this text in a weird half metaphorical / half not situation that is rather confusing.

And it isn't very Solarpunkish 😉

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  • [–] [S] 1 point 2 years ago*

    Ok, I see. To be honest, I didn't put as much thought in this than in the last stories. Maybe it would have worked if it was longer ... I will think about it! Thanks anyway for the feedback.

    And it isn’t very Solarpunkish 😉

    the use of “open web” etc makes it too up front as well

    That's true. But otherwise, I don't think the idea would have come across

    Well yes, but Solarpunk also supported dezentrality 😇

    the use of “open web” etc makes it too up front as well

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