I also saw a person buy the first book coming out of the store. I really enjoyed the series so far.

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Your mileage may vary. I find the writing crude but I still enjoy the books as light reading.

My main (but not only) beef is that the narration of the dungeon (the "ai") talks like a 16yo boy. Lots of swearing, sexual allusions, whores and bitches, etc. Then the main character rolls his eyes or makes a comment to show disapproval. But it's still in the book, constantly, so you're supposed to find it funny.

No plot holes as far as I can tell, though.

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