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[–] 4 points 1 year ago (1 child)

"This can't possibly be the same 9PM at which I once would prepare for outings."

Does this work better, or am I crazy?

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  • [–] 3 points 1 year ago

    Yes, but with "fixing" the structure, you have robbed it of colloquialism. Maybe it's just me projecting.

    I lived among non-native speakers for the longest time, and shaped my English using my knowledge of other languages to bridge some gaps in communication. Now I'm back to a native environment and catch myself slipping up with my invented phrases.

    The thing is, I can't find another combination of words to convey the exact sentiment so succintly, even though I'm not sure it's gramatically correct.

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