The party with the highest number of votes proposes laws, they have to pass both houses to become law
This seems like one big parliament with extra steps. Is the benefit of this process that you are specifically getting MPs that represent specific areas to agree to pass it, separately to people whose party was voted in but personally they don't answer to anyone? I guess while I can see some benefit of the two stages I'm not sure I get why it's worth the effort. Is the benefit more in that you select them in a different way and on a separate cycle?
every vote is a conscious vote
I don't get how that works in practice. Wouldn't there be an expectation that MPs vote with their party, even if you claim it's a conscience vote? Is there some law now that says MPs have to vote the way their party says?
Any law that is proposed would be submitted to the advisory panel where the experts would write a report listing the possible benefits and the harms of the law. They don’t get a vote.
I'm assuming the membership can choose whether or not to participate? E.g. the milking industry will want to participate in an advisory panel on water quality in rivers, but they may not care about laws relating to offshore oil drilling. How do you prevent this advisory panel from advising water quality isn't an issue because the one tourism advisor representing the kayaker tour operators gets outnumbered by the dairy, agriculture, and power company representatives?